tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post4020215137762678733..comments2023-10-27T00:53:04.507+03:00Comments on <br>The relativity of a corroded mind: Bitesize fiction. Rupture IILaviniahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-69855931078858342892011-09-24T00:00:22.884+03:002011-09-24T00:00:22.884+03:00I read this when you posted it, but had difficulty...I read this when you posted it, but had difficulty commenting at the time. A tragic piece, very well captured.Desireehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01069419364783245762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-57443702898302187142011-09-18T18:53:32.138+03:002011-09-18T18:53:32.138+03:00Powerful writing!Powerful writing!Deb Shuckahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03439395710731341021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-65270452889522615922011-09-16T16:07:04.905+03:002011-09-16T16:07:04.905+03:00Well written... mingling over from Carol's fab...Well written... mingling over from Carol's fabulous party!! High Heeled Lifehighheeledlifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07205935979513877589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-89269329207025054972011-09-15T13:19:22.449+03:002011-09-15T13:19:22.449+03:00Well done!Well done!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15849036690807834080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-62634266443788800102011-09-15T12:53:46.903+03:002011-09-15T12:53:46.903+03:00Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.Laviniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-81492591324974045732011-09-14T15:39:06.580+03:002011-09-14T15:39:06.580+03:00Excellent piece of writing from you Lavi. Quite mo...Excellent piece of writing from you Lavi. Quite moving too. Very poignant and sad.Southhamsdarlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12285980805569582676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-33269653520289434312011-09-14T03:26:35.050+03:002011-09-14T03:26:35.050+03:00Let me explain... This piece is a counterpart to R...<b>Let me explain...</b> This piece is a counterpart to <a href="http://thegrinningcrocodile.blogspot.com/2011/09/bitesize-fiction-rupture.html" rel="nofollow">Rupture</a><br />The first part was from the perspective a person who committed suicide because of unrequited love (to put it bluntly). It is mostly "auditive" (except for the smile) and an addressed monologue, so I imagined it would be a farewell message recorded on the cassette.<br />The second part is the answer, from the perspective of the loved person.<br />Notice the "dreams" motif... I hope you enjoy them both.Laviniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.com