tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post5137960142787705944..comments2023-10-27T00:53:04.507+03:00Comments on <br>The relativity of a corroded mind: Bitesize fiction. The flower in the windowLaviniahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-83947741097525668472011-03-25T23:34:08.818+02:002011-03-25T23:34:08.818+02:00Thank you, ladies, and welcome, Susan! I hope I ca...Thank you, ladies, and welcome, Susan! I hope I can keep everyone entertained (at least for a while).Laviniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-38317396194131449662011-03-25T23:16:17.688+02:002011-03-25T23:16:17.688+02:00Hello Lavi, Thankyou for visiting my blog. I have ...Hello Lavi, Thankyou for visiting my blog. I have been looking through yours and am enjoying your writings very much. <br />This story is so beautiful and evokes strong emotion.<br />I shall continue to enjoy reading your stories :D)Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15849036690807834080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-18034812915121606592011-03-20T16:53:16.101+02:002011-03-20T16:53:16.101+02:00Came back, Lavi...what a lovely explanation for th...Came back, Lavi...what a lovely explanation for the prompt aspect of this story :)<br /><br />I don't think lily of the valley plants are even available in SA...but, my Gran LOVED them (she may have seen some on a trip to England when she was a young bride, the only time she ever left SA). I've also remembered she had a pretty linen and lace handkerchief with lily of the valley flowers embroidered on it. That was something else she did. Collected beautiful hankies!Desireehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01069419364783245762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-24282750610311517592011-03-20T14:15:47.242+02:002011-03-20T14:15:47.242+02:00Thank you for dropping by! I have to admit, I'...Thank you for dropping by! I have to admit, I'll know you've been here before you get a chance to say so. I don't have other visitors from your country.<br><br />This little story was a reminiscence of old stories I used to read about soldiers' wives waiting for their husbands to come home.<br><br />The lily of the valley is a lovely flower, your grandmother had good taste...Laviniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08077833136741791230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1879480942536914715.post-16204592606093293522011-03-20T10:33:13.637+02:002011-03-20T10:33:13.637+02:00Hi Lavi!
I had read this yesterday, but was in ...Hi Lavi! <br /><br />I had read this yesterday, but was in a hurry at the time, so didn't leave a comment. Thought I'd pop back today, rather and let you know...I WAS HERE!<br /><br />You do seem to have a fascination with presenting 'gloomy' (DARK) scenes? It certainly sets the mood quite dramatically...I did enjoy this piece and could imagine the setting quite vividly from the descriptiveness of your words. I also felt a sadness for your potagonist...waiting (longing) for her absent (missing) loved one.<br /><br />The lily of the valley flower reminded me very much of my long-deceased grandmother - the scent (perfume) from these was her absolute favourite. She always wore Lily of the Valley eau de toilette. <br /><br />I'm enjoying these bite-sized pieces of your very much :)Desireehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01069419364783245762noreply@blogger.com